concrit time!

[unbidden.livejournal.com]

A lot of people, at some point or another, have wondered how they're handling a character. Whether they're playing them spectacularly well, or whether they think they need a little bit of assistance and tips from their fellow players, whatever floats your boat!

So, with mod-flavoured approval, this is where this post comes in!

✘ HOW'S MY RPING?

If you're up for some concrit from your fellow players, comment here with the names and journal names of the characters that you'd like concrit & praises for. Anonymous commenting isn't allowed, so obviously if you think it's wise to outright flame you've got another thing coming. Be mature, guys! Srsly. D: Or Roxas will frown at you ♥

IF YOU COMMENT HERE, ALL CRIT RECEIVED IS YOUR RESPONSIBILITY. k? k. I still love you all, though. Unless you're just commenting to be mean, in which case there's a little grey box with an 'x' on it for me to click.

Go wild within reason!

Comments

[unbidden.livejournal.com]

*deep breath*

Xemnas [firstsilence]
Roxas [oblivioning]
Yazoo [velvetbullet]
Tinkerbell [slightmischief]
Ada Wong [herassignment]

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Roxas --

Astounding. I've seen a lot of different kinds of him that's been played. Most of them? Not so good. Yours? I think balances between the "kid" in Twilight Town and the Organization member. We see both versions in the game, and you seem to sort of combine the two, which is great. I can say I'm not so big into Axel/Roxas, personally, but you and Axel-mun also make that work while retaining their characters -- and that's a mighty feat indeed.

I haven't RPed with the others enough to have much of an opinion yet, but one day, I WILL.

[gravity-walk.livejournal.com]

Well, here goes, right?

I'm the player of...
Xigbar [gravity_walk]
Lexaeus [tread_the_earth]
Tir McDohl [hero_mcdohl]

I'd really appreciate some comments/suggestions/whatever on those three. It's my first time playing the two Kingdom Hearts characters, and Tir ... well, I'm not expecting much commenting from him, really! Anything at all! Please!

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Xigbar --

YES. FUCKING YES. I need to RP with him more! I love your Xigbar. Just badass enough while keeping his cool without dropping into the stereotypes of fandom. I've seen 'em all; crazy!Xigbar, stoner!Xigbar, even uke!Xigbar. No way, man. You pretty much screw those stereotypes over. You make Xigbar fucking sweet.

I need to play more with your other characters before I can make a proper opinion, however.

ha ha ha why are three of the four from tales games?

[jaythebrat.livejournal.com]

Jay the Unseen - Tales of Legendia - jaythebrat

Arietta the Wild - Tales of the Abyss - anisesucks

Rossiu Adai - Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann - foreheadkun

Presea Combatir - Tales of Symphonia - fragileshield

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Jay --

Okay. I have NOT played any of the Tales games, but I can say for sure that I really, seriously, ONE HUNDRED PERCENT enjoy role playing with Jay. It takes a lot of skill to make a mun care about a character that they're not familiar with. Sad, but it's the truth, but you pull it off. I don't know Jay other than what you've presented, and you show his personality so strongly that I've got a pretty damned good image in my head of what he's like. That's pretty frickin' amazing right there.

I'll always look forward to more RP with my First~


I have no RPed with the others enough to make a strong opinion, but Arietta is very amusing, I must say, from what I've seen of her.

[manyforms.livejournal.com]

SINCE EVERYONE ELSE IS LIKE, "OSHI ORZ OTL" AND THE LIKE...

bring it on.

Sora. Kingdom Hearts. ...THIS JOURNAL OBVIOUSLY GOSH. -lazy- D8

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

I. Fucking. LOVE. YOUR SORA.

Seriously. I've RPed with a lot of Soras, and yours, my dear, is the best. He's well balanced, and though he retains a lot of his innocence, he's not blind, stupid, nor childish. Sure, he's naive. Sure, he's optimistic. But you don't make him into his horrid stereotypes in fandom.

No, you make him perfect. Just smart enough, just heroic enough, just REAL enough.

I'm completely honest here; you are the best Sora I've ever RPed with, and it's always a pleasure. Thank you for being amazing.

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

D:

Harry Mason / Silent Hill / picksupstrays
Walter Sullivan / Silent Hill 4 / crazyhoboninja
Saix / Kingdom Hearts II / falltheseventh
Loz / Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children / stfunotcrying
Hiro Nakamura / Heroes / timebending
The King of All Cosmos / Katamari Damacy / eversofabulous

DON'T HOLD BACK. *crai*

[derestissilence.livejournal.com]

Where can I even begin with the sheer awesome of your RPing? Seriously. Your RP Awesome Level is over 9000.

Don't ever leave us!

[wont-lose.livejournal.com]

I CAN TAKE IT! DON'T HOLD BACK.

Nuriko - wont_lose

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

NURIKO!

You take me back to my Fushigi Yuugi days. When you take a step back, and look at Fushigi Yuugi? It's not so original anymore. But it was the FIRST of its kind. A girl in a feudal era with amusing characters and a wonderful story.

Nuriko is a beloved character, very memorable. I must say, he was my first favorite from the others, and it makes me happy to see that you're playing him so well. I only hope that one of my characters will interact more with yours.

[masakados.livejournal.com]

Tifa Lockhart (heartxwish)
Leon S. Kennedy (knifexgun)
Rufus Shinra (owestheworld)
Lisa Garland (alonetomorrow)
Alice Liddell (curiousest)

BRING IT ONNNNNNNNNNNN >O

[derestissilence.livejournal.com]

My only crit right now? Needs moar Rufus.

[derestissilence.livejournal.com]

Cid Highwind: sail_the_skies, Final Fantasy VII
Mew: 151_thinkpink, Pokemon
Godot: abitterbrew, Phoenix Wright: Trials and Tribulations
Pyramid Head: greatkniferape, Silent Hill 2
Thessalonike: mer_victory, Greek Mythology

Putting them all up on the line.

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Cid --

Have not RPed with him enough to have a strong opinion.


Mew --

Amusing, but I haven't seen him enough to have a strong opinion.


Godot --

Same here.


Pyramid Head --

I've only got a few real complaints. Mostly, I don't see him enough. Which is, admittedly, difficult to do; one of the most fearsome things about PH is that when you see him, you freak out. When he does pop up, it's scary. However, I will say that when I see him, I don't feel frightened by him. I don't mean to sound egotistical, but I'm told when I have Walter post, he's consistently creepy -- that way, I know I'm writing him well. You may want to think about PH a bit more, is all.


Thessa --

Haven't played enough with to form a strong opinion.

Cuz I'm a Masochist for Punishment!

[holy-heretic.livejournal.com]

Alessa Gillespie: holy_heretic Silent Hill 1
Father Vincent: sardonic_moon Silent Hill 3
Lobsel Vith: he_of_paradise Silent Hill 1
Kazahaya Kudo: empathetic_fool Legal Drug

Yesss!

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Alessa --

I haven't really seen anyone actually play Alessa. Nope; I've seen a thousand Heathers, but I've not seen anyone play Alessa. But hey, here you are! I'm always happy to play with her. My only complaint is that we seem to have a hard time seeing eye to eye on things, plot-wise -- but never character-wise.


Vincent --

Shit, do I love Vincent. You just need to bring him out more. Or maybe I need to RP with him more. Yeah, that's probably it.


Lobsel Vith --

Man, I never thought anyone would play the Yellow God -- and actually pull it off. XD That's pretty amazing.


Kudo --

Not enough RP to make a valid opinion.

[lottery.livejournal.com]

Namine [fairoblivion], Kingdom Hearts
Aerith [livingrose], Kingdom Hearts
Larxene [v_oltage], Kingdom Hearts
Alice [i_nquisitive], American McGee's Alice
Peter Pan [neverlandboy], Peter Pan

HIT ME BABY. ♥

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Namine --

So squishy and cute. ._. *embraces her* I really love Namine. I really need to play with her more. *chus* D:


Aerith --

HAHAHA oh shit, sorry Walter creeped you out. Yes, um. I don't play with her enough to say anything strongly about her, but thanks for putting up with Walter. XD


Larxene --

Shit. Yes. I love you playing her. Sadistic bitch that she is. XD I want to see her more often around here.


Alice --

Have not played enough with to say anything strong.


Peter Pan --

OH MY GOD. I love him so much. I love how you're playing him. I want to hug him and fly with him and geek out hardcore. I grew up on the Peter Pan story. My mom READ it to me as a bed time story. I squee to see him here. Thank you for picking him up. :D

I FORESEE FLAMEZ.

[affection.livejournal.com]

Uh ohs.

Heather/Cheryl Mason | onceagod
Zexion | zexions

[alba-aulbath.livejournal.com]

Heather --

FUCKING PLAY HER MORE, YOU BITCH. I'm serious, you're playing her fine. Fuck you, fucking play her more, fuck fuck. D:


Zexion --

No strong opinions yet. I need to play Saix more. *loses*

[innocentxcharm.livejournal.com]

I'm probably too new to actually get much crit... ^^;

Florian innocentxcharm

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

No crit from me yet, but hopefully one day I will have an opinion. :D

[noroimustdie.livejournal.com]

Martel Yggdrassil - Tales of Symphonia - forharmony

Ema Skye - Phoenix Wright - scientificterms

Grune - Tales of Legendia - easygoingbabe

Denzel - Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children - inhiscase

Rhode Camelot - D.Gray-man - thesweetestkill

[affection.livejournal.com]

I LOVE ALL OF THEM LASKJLASDJASLKJ AND YOU TEMPT ME TO BRING IN JASDERO OR TIKI.

;w;

[hagane-no-romi.livejournal.com]

...I'm skeerd, guys. BE GENTLE. (lol though really, just be honest. I want to do my best! Dx) O-Okay then, I'm really gonna risk it and put...everyone I play:

Demyx sitard
Haru lynxual
James wifeforalife
Kadaj mothersfavorite
Genis miniwiz

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

FUCK YES. *attacks with love*


Demyx --

I've seen a lot of different versions. Most of them fucking suck. I've seen the OMG CRAPS-LOCK HYPER BITCH. I've seen the "mwahaha I'm rly a psycho under it all" bit. I've seen a lot of fucking versions that fucking suck and I hate them. HOWEVER. However, you manage to make him come to life, even before he had a heart, and that is amazing. He has a solid personality. I love his pouts. I love seeing him care so much for Yotsuba. I like it when he giggles. I really want to RP with your Demyx more. I really just SHOULD.


Haru --

I have not read Fire Candy, though one day I intend to. Regardless, this doesn't prevent me from enjoying Haru. Yes, he's a manslut, whatever; I think he's horridly amusing, even in his whorish nature. I haven't much more to say than that, unfortunately, but I do enjoy RPing with him, and that's important.


James --

Fufufu.

I've seen so. Many. Versions. Of him. I've seen him, in most cases, be too damned nice. You know what? James isn't evil, sure, but he's not exactly Mr. Nice Guy. Oh, he might try, but what motivates James is his own benefit. It's the unfortunate truth; in a way, one may be able to look at James as the basics of human nature. He kind of takes and does what works for him, and only him. He doesn't stick around for anyone else in most cases. You PULL THAT OFF. You make him JAMES SUNDERLAND and I thank you for this. ._. Also, thank you for putting up with my pestering for scenes. I only do it because I adore RPing with you, my dear.


Kadaj --

MOAR KADAJ. PLZ. It's probably my fault for not bringing out Loz enough.


Genis --

No opinion just yet! Sorry, husband.

[quiche.livejournal.com]

I could really use the help. My e-way trio are three of my weaker muses. I love them dearly but spend a lot of time squinting at the screen and going, "Buh. This doesn't sound right." So plz to be helping me improve these buggers.

Marluxia : scytheofpetals
King Mickey Mouse : goldkeyblade
Sarabi : knownsorrow

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

Marluxia --

Ever. Lovin'. Bastard. AND YET he remains companions with Yotsuba? That's amazing. Man, what a weird combo, but hey -- guess what? You make it work. I just wish I'd see Marluxia around more. DON'T BE SHY, PQ.


Mickey --

Only one thing? MOAR MICKEY. D:


Sarabi --

Man. I gotta play with the Lion King cast more. My fault here.

[manyforms.livejournal.com]

OH RIGHT HA HA BEFORE I GO TO BED...

Narugami/Thor | Matantei Loki Ragnarok | denryoku

Zelos Wilder | Tales of Symphonia | charmthegirls

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED TO GUILMON

[manyforms.livejournal.com]

BECAUSE SOMEONE HERE IS SO FREAKIN DEMANDING WHILE I AM ATTEMPTING TO BED MYSELF oh how dirty I am 8D

Guilmon | Digimon Tamers | yumbread

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

HAHAHA FUCK YES.




Ahem.

I haven't watched all of Digimon Tamers, but can I just say that I love Guilmon and Saix's friendship? That is NOT a relationship I ever saw happening, but there you go. They're friends, even if Saix would NEVER admit to it -- he does enjoy Guilmon's company. I like Guilmon's fierce loyalty and his friendliness -- yet, his simplicity without being stupid. Well done, Kura. :3

OKAY GO TO BED NOW

[truth-love-free.livejournal.com]

Ashley Graham criesforhelp [Resident Evil 4]
Hermione Granger proudlymudblood [Harry Potter]

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

Have not played with Ashley yet. But I'd like to, considering how much I have Walter hang out with Leon.

NEED to play with Hermione. I adore her from HP.

Will make opinions one day soon, rest assured.

... god I'm gonna hate myself in the morning for this.

[leochan.livejournal.com]

Well... um... I guess... Tampon-mod would like some concrit as well.

Yotsuba Koiwai from Yotsuba& [yotsubakoiwai]
Sheena Fujibayashi from Tales of Symphonia [pinkribbonmagic]
Najica Hiiragi from Najica Blitz Tactics [najicahiiragi]
Kaname Chidori from Full Metal Panic [jindaiangel]
Fon Master Ion (7th replica) from Tales of the Abyss [areplication]

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

THEY ALL SUCK

LIKE YOU SUCK

YOU FUCKING SUCK YOU SUCKING FUCK FUCKER FUCK.

...

I'm kidding please don't hurt me. D:


Seriously, though.

Yotsuba --

I have never, ever read anything with her in it. But she's so terribly adorable that I wanna nomnom her up. SO CUTE. I love her. Can I keep her? D:

[iamtherealriku.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I could use some crit. :| So, here goes nothing....

Riku Replica | Kingdom Hearts | iamtherealriku
Sonic Hedgehog | Sonic SatAM | juicinjam

[affection.livejournal.com]

Repliku; Less emo, more snark.

[vermilionxbird.livejournal.com]

Kururugi Suzaku [vermilionxbird] - Code Geass ~Hangyaku No Lelouch~

B-B-B-BRING IT OOOOONNN!! T_________________T

[euphiepink.livejournal.com]

Well if it ain't for you, Euyphie wodn't have shown up, neh? Plain good RPing~

[bared-ambition.livejournal.com]

Okay...

Scar / bared_ambition
Kuja / merelyapawn
Joachim / abatslament

[lottery.livejournal.com]

SCAR: Dude, never seen him RPed before evar, but it's awesome to see your entries! I'm a dork and try to imagine voice actors reading them, so it's nice to see that you have his voice and snark down, especially when everyone and their mom is like HOLY CRAP A TALKING LION GET IN THE VAAAN!1! Scar's brilliant, so keep up the good work!

Unfortunately, I haven't interacted too much with the rest. I WILL FIX THIS SOON, I SWEAR. D:

[euphiepink.livejournal.com]

Im so nervous...

Teletha Testarossa - mithrilgurl
Euphemia Li Britannia/Euphie - euphiepink

*mutters about stupid LJ code*

[jas-matthew.livejournal.com]

I suppose I haven't many characters to look at yet, or really that much RP under my belt -- but how'm I doin?

Captain Jas. Hook - Uhm, it's this journal.

[letmehealyou.livejournal.com]

Uwaaah. Okay. I CAN TAKE IT. REALLY. XO ...gyah. XD; *nervous*

Fai D. Flowright [Post chapter 125-ish]- kitty_in_wonder
Kobato Hanato - letmehealyou

[picksupstrays.livejournal.com]

Kobato --

I'm completely unfamiliar with her series, but I love Kobato anyway. She's so damned adorable and fluffy and cute and I want to HUG HER FOREVER oh lord. +_+ Must RP with her more.